Last Romance
I wrote this poem about 13 years ago. Normally, I would fix it up and make it more mature. In this case I wanted to leave this alone, because it is almost like I am showing myself in my innocence to the world.
Forever ends all so soon
we haven't had much time for together
but we'll always have our moon
it brought an atmosphere of love
and admiration
with a strong tug on completion,
commitment, and dedication
though, all good things has
to come to an halt
the sight for seeing such true love
was sought
now, leaving us two to be
dearly departed
memories to forever be loved hearted
these seconds, minutes, and hours
being our last chance
to show love
through the greatest romance
Forever ends all so soon
we haven't had much time for together
but we'll always have our moon
it brought an atmosphere of love
and admiration
with a strong tug on completion,
commitment, and dedication
though, all good things has
to come to an halt
the sight for seeing such true love
was sought
now, leaving us two to be
dearly departed
memories to forever be loved hearted
these seconds, minutes, and hours
being our last chance
to show love
through the greatest romance
At first I thought you were saying that you were 13 when you wrote this. I am not sure how old you were, but this is good.
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